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Reviewer: AKovar Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 1:46:01 PM Title: The Calm Before the Storm

This has been an unbelieveable ride of a story! I love the environment and the feel you've generated with your 'wordiness'. Bothe the setting and the characters have depth. Honestly, keep it coming- don't quit on this one...finish it out. It really is great!

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 6:06:01 AM Title: The Calm Before the Storm

The calm before the storm indeed. I'm really enjoying the way this is developing, especially Logan's character - it's very realistic *g*. Though my fave bit has to be:

"And the smile, apparently infectious, spread right on to the Cyclops and tweaked the corner of his mouth just so while he watched her go from the corner of his eye."

That just touched me! I had this big grin plastered across my face. *hugs Scott for being so...so.. cute!*

Looking forward to the next part :o) Yay!

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