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[Report This]Date: 10/22/2008 5:08:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
we've taken a visit to the dark side!
you could really feel the frustration and their reasons for it both from Logans and Maries side and as for the climax to this fic [sorry, couldn't help the pun ;) ] I don't really see that he was having to *force* his way anywhere, seems she was quite happy!
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2007 8:02:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Claws...shoulders, ouch that's gotta hurt!
Date: 03/21/2007 2:10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
"still against the wall, Logan forcing his way in, pinning me to the place like a butterfly through my shoulders with his claws."
Ok, uh, I get that he's got her clawed through the shoulders, but...um.....*scratches head* the 'forcing his way in' line.....um...is this his, uh,..claws being forced in or...ah...hmmmm...ya know.....something else???
(honest to god, I do not live in the gutter!! My mind just visits there occasionally! ;)
Author's Response: Don't worry about the gutter part... :)
I'd imagine that Logan doesn't need to force his claws in to anywhere. I think they're sharp enough to slide smoothly. It is something else. This was not a nice chapter to write.
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2007 4:24:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Living forever would suck. I think Logan has handled it pretty well in this insistance little series of yours ^.~ Me and my boyfriend probably would have been taken bets on who could finally make the other die by now. But the claws through the shoulders? Harsh.
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2007 3:55:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ow damn ow ow ow damnit ow!
Author's Response: Ouch. My words exactly. But they insisted that I tell about this, too.