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Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2012 11:13:51 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

Ahahahah! This was a pleasure to read! So much humor, steam, excitment and all of the great characters! I loved it. the hidden bits in the story that relate to the movies, like Xaviers name on the force, Jubes take on Jean...the guys nicknames.. ;) It all added up to a great afternoon read.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2009 9:54:36 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

seriously, this was such a realistic, thrilling, cool plot it could totally be made into a really kick ass cop/action movie.

you've got mobsters, pedos, psychos, that awesome car race through the park, a shootout, EVERYTHING. and omg, this last chapter almost made me cryyyyyyyy it was so sweet.

stellar stuff!

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 6:16:24 AM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

This is a wonderful and believable story. Logan and Scott as cops works really well. I love the family concept, how L & M came together [pardon the pun] and your dialogue was great throughout.

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 2:21:04 AM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

It was cute, and sweet, and I love reading about the characters as normal people. Sometimes you don't give enough detail, or the words don't flow right. Try rereading it to yourself , and if you think it sounds choppy, then rearrange it. *grins* great job though!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 9:07:18 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

Another great, well written, story.
Stands out from the usual. Love the AU, without the mutations and Logan/Scott being cops, and how you still managed to keep the characters true to themselves.
Maybe could have done with a bit more build up, instead of Logan falling for Marie at first sight, just for a change ;)

Reviewer: Digiella Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 8:08:26 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

“So’s my appendix, but scientists have proved I don’t need that either!” -Nicely said! XDD Logan's relationship with Marie just is so sickeningly sweet... and I can't get enough of it XD

Man though. I knew it wasn't going to be a good idea for Logan to leave her cuffed to the car. The first thing that popped into my head was "Shit. Don't do that! How she's supposed to run when Creed gets there?" Not that Marie would run, but still!

I was about to get VERY angry with you if Logan had died. D< Logan can't die! He's too hot! It wouldn't be fair to the rest of the world if you took that out!

I am left kind of curious about Logan's past though... I have my suspisions from the clues you left in the text, but nothing is blatantly said.. He doesn't like to be touched, He *hates* his dad, and he looked kind of withdrawn (lookin' at 'is boots and all) whenever they were talking about those kids being sexually abused.. Leads me to think in a certain direction but GAH!

Maaan... I had to write all that twice... -glares at laptop- I'm going to have to re-educate my laptop one of these days... Anyway, great story~

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2007 2:41:01 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

LOL! Oh, that crazy Scott! :-P
Okay, that steamy scene was....well, SUPER steamy! Oh, the things I wish I could do to that man...and the things he could do to me. *Wink,wink* Hehehe!
Great ending to a great story!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 10:10:18 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

I simply LOVED this! No other way to put it. A really nice, simple story of two people that find each other despite what The Powers That Be have to throw at them.

Brava! My dear! Brava!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 12:57:39 AM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

Any chance of a sequel?

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 2:34:34 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

*sigh*

*happy sigh*

*very happy sigh*

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