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Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2012 12:58:07 AM Title: Follow Me

Oh, how I love that Logan and Scott are cops. *sigh* :D
And then, oh no to Creed! :S

Reviewer: Aoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2012 10:32:25 PM Title: Trust

Oooh, intense, very intense.

Reviewer: jenefaner Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2012 11:13:51 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

Ahahahah! This was a pleasure to read! So much humor, steam, excitment and all of the great characters! I loved it. the hidden bits in the story that relate to the movies, like Xaviers name on the force, Jubes take on Jean...the guys nicknames.. ;) It all added up to a great afternoon read.

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2011 9:40:48 AM Title: Stolen

Great beginning. I loved the hesitant flirting. Giggled through that whole section just from the thought! Poor Marie! Of course Logan will get Warren back!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2009 9:54:36 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

seriously, this was such a realistic, thrilling, cool plot it could totally be made into a really kick ass cop/action movie.

you've got mobsters, pedos, psychos, that awesome car race through the park, a shootout, EVERYTHING. and omg, this last chapter almost made me cryyyyyyyy it was so sweet.

stellar stuff!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2009 9:36:17 PM Title: Watch Me Die

ok, i am slow on the uptake. i just figured out Braddock from IAB is Psylocke.

god, this is such a great story. i just hope the last chapter shows logan and alive and happy ending!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2009 8:09:28 PM Title: Stolen

oooh, i just found this story and i love the no-powers ones. mmmm, Logan as the strong cop, yummy!

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 6:16:24 AM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

This is a wonderful and believable story. Logan and Scott as cops works really well. I love the family concept, how L & M came together [pardon the pun] and your dialogue was great throughout.

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 2:21:04 AM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

It was cute, and sweet, and I love reading about the characters as normal people. Sometimes you don't give enough detail, or the words don't flow right. Try rereading it to yourself , and if you think it sounds choppy, then rearrange it. *grins* great job though!

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2008 12:03:43 AM Title: Reunited

I LOVE your Scott. And how you've made Jean and Logan siblings. Here's my belly laugh lines.

"Dig a hole. The man’s going down."


"He finally falls for someone, and she’s got more baggage than an airport check-in."
great job so far!

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 9:07:18 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

Another great, well written, story.
Stands out from the usual. Love the AU, without the mutations and Logan/Scott being cops, and how you still managed to keep the characters true to themselves.
Maybe could have done with a bit more build up, instead of Logan falling for Marie at first sight, just for a change ;)

Reviewer: Digiella Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 8:08:26 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

“So’s my appendix, but scientists have proved I don’t need that either!” -Nicely said! XDD Logan's relationship with Marie just is so sickeningly sweet... and I can't get enough of it XD

Man though. I knew it wasn't going to be a good idea for Logan to leave her cuffed to the car. The first thing that popped into my head was "Shit. Don't do that! How she's supposed to run when Creed gets there?" Not that Marie would run, but still!

I was about to get VERY angry with you if Logan had died. D< Logan can't die! He's too hot! It wouldn't be fair to the rest of the world if you took that out!

I am left kind of curious about Logan's past though... I have my suspisions from the clues you left in the text, but nothing is blatantly said.. He doesn't like to be touched, He *hates* his dad, and he looked kind of withdrawn (lookin' at 'is boots and all) whenever they were talking about those kids being sexually abused.. Leads me to think in a certain direction but GAH!

Maaan... I had to write all that twice... -glares at laptop- I'm going to have to re-educate my laptop one of these days... Anyway, great story~

Reviewer: Digiella Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 7:31:37 PM Title: Trust

:3 I like this, it's realistic without all the angst that their mutations brought them but still giving them a little of real life angst that it works. I like the sweet tone to this chapter, their just so cute together >3 Haha, and I absolutly *love* Warrens reaction to his temparary room XDDD wow... so great...

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2007 2:41:01 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

LOL! Oh, that crazy Scott! :-P
Okay, that steamy scene was....well, SUPER steamy! Oh, the things I wish I could do to that man...and the things he could do to me. *Wink,wink* Hehehe!
Great ending to a great story!

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 10:10:18 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

I simply LOVED this! No other way to put it. A really nice, simple story of two people that find each other despite what The Powers That Be have to throw at them.

Brava! My dear! Brava!

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 12:57:39 AM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

Any chance of a sequel?

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 2:34:34 PM Title: Promises, Threats and Snowcones

*sigh*

*happy sigh*

*very happy sigh*

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 2:51:02 AM Title: Watch Me Die

Hey another evil cliffhanger... *growls*

Reviewer: Dromeda Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 10:22:49 PM Title: Watch Me Die

Don't keep up hangin'! Post the next chapter soon. This is really a great story.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2007 5:03:45 PM Title: Watch Me Die

I know you did NOT just kill him! I better see some super healing or something in the next chapter or or....I'll just cry :(

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 2:48:21 PM Title: Follow Me

Oh my gawd! Logan your bright idea is SO not working. Please update soon, you cannot leave it on a cliffy :(

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 12:30:35 PM Title: Follow Me

No!Nononononononono!!!! Oh, you are an evil, evil person! I'm gonna give you fifteen minutes to update before I start crying... :(

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 11:19:47 AM Title: Follow Me

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!

Evil cliffhanger, so evil!

Reviewer: Cassandra Lee Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2007 10:46:07 AM Title: Searching

You're doing a great job with this story. I can't wait for you to update.

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2007 12:50:10 PM Title: Searching

LOL! Great chapter. Okay, I know I am sad but my favourite bit was when Marie had to look away because Logan crossed his arms and his muscles were bulging. *Sigh* I can just picture that....*Drool*

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