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Oh, how I love that Logan and Scott are cops. *sigh* :D
And then, oh no to Creed! :S
Oooh, intense, very intense.
Ahahahah! This was a pleasure to read! So much humor, steam, excitment and all of the great characters! I loved it. the hidden bits in the story that relate to the movies, like Xaviers name on the force, Jubes take on Jean...the guys nicknames.. ;) It all added up to a great afternoon read.
Great beginning. I loved the hesitant flirting. Giggled through that whole section just from the thought! Poor Marie! Of course Logan will get Warren back!
seriously, this was such a realistic, thrilling, cool plot it could totally be made into a really kick ass cop/action movie.
you've got mobsters, pedos, psychos, that awesome car race through the park, a shootout, EVERYTHING. and omg, this last chapter almost made me cryyyyyyyy it was so sweet.
stellar stuff!
ok, i am slow on the uptake. i just figured out Braddock from IAB is Psylocke.
god, this is such a great story. i just hope the last chapter shows logan and alive and happy ending!
oooh, i just found this story and i love the no-powers ones. mmmm, Logan as the strong cop, yummy!
This is a wonderful and believable story. Logan and Scott as cops works really well. I love the family concept, how L & M came together [pardon the pun] and your dialogue was great throughout.
It was cute, and sweet, and I love reading about the characters as normal people. Sometimes you don't give enough detail, or the words don't flow right. Try rereading it to yourself , and if you think it sounds choppy, then rearrange it. *grins* great job though!
I LOVE your Scott. And how you've made Jean and Logan siblings. Here's my belly laugh lines.
"Dig a hole. The man’s going down."
"He finally falls for someone, and she’s got more baggage than an airport check-in." great job so far!
Another great, well written, story.
Stands out from the usual. Love the AU, without the mutations and Logan/Scott being cops, and how you still managed to keep the characters true to themselves.
Maybe could have done with a bit more build up, instead of Logan falling for Marie at first sight, just for a change ;)
“So’s my appendix, but scientists have proved I don’t need that either!” -Nicely said! XDD Logan's relationship with Marie just is so sickeningly sweet... and I can't get enough of it XD
Man though. I knew it wasn't going to be a good idea for Logan to leave her cuffed to the car. The first thing that popped into my head was "Shit. Don't do that! How she's supposed to run when Creed gets there?" Not that Marie would run, but still!
I was about to get VERY angry with you if Logan had died. D< Logan can't die! He's too hot! It wouldn't be fair to the rest of the world if you took that out!
I am left kind of curious about Logan's past though... I have my suspisions from the clues you left in the text, but nothing is blatantly said.. He doesn't like to be touched, He *hates* his dad, and he looked kind of withdrawn (lookin' at 'is boots and all) whenever they were talking about those kids being sexually abused.. Leads me to think in a certain direction but GAH!
Maaan... I had to write all that twice... -glares at laptop- I'm going to have to re-educate my laptop one of these days... Anyway, great story~
:3 I like this, it's realistic without all the angst that their mutations brought them but still giving them a little of real life angst that it works. I like the sweet tone to this chapter, their just so cute together >3 Haha, and I absolutly *love* Warrens reaction to his temparary room XDDD wow... so great...
LOL! Oh, that crazy Scott! :-P
Okay, that steamy scene was....well, SUPER steamy! Oh, the things I wish I could do to that man...and the things he could do to me. *Wink,wink* Hehehe!
Great ending to a great story!
I simply LOVED this! No other way to put it. A really nice, simple story of two people that find each other despite what The Powers That Be have to throw at them.
Brava! My dear! Brava!
Any chance of a sequel?
*sigh*
*happy sigh*
*very happy sigh*
Hey another evil cliffhanger... *growls*
Don't keep up hangin'! Post the next chapter soon. This is really a great story.
I know you did NOT just kill him! I better see some super healing or something in the next chapter or or....I'll just cry :(
Oh my gawd! Logan your bright idea is SO not working. Please update soon, you cannot leave it on a cliffy :(
No!Nononononononono!!!! Oh, you are an evil, evil person! I'm gonna give you fifteen minutes to update before I start crying... :(
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
Evil cliffhanger, so evil!
You're doing a great job with this story. I can't wait for you to update.
LOL! Great chapter. Okay, I know I am sad but my favourite bit was when Marie had to look away because Logan crossed his arms and his muscles were bulging. *Sigh* I can just picture that....*Drool*