Style-wise, these two chapters might actually the best I've read from you so far! With very few exceptions, register and grammar fit Logan very well indeed; great how his moods flow and turn.
The sparse descriptions, the terse language and the strong reliance on dialogue work great together in giving us Marie, Logan (outside view) and Logan (inside view) and even Jean (through the eyes of Marie) - all intricately woven and welded together like damascene steel.
Though there is not much action, it makes an exciting read as the story challenges the reader all the time to look for small clues, to figure out what happened on the basis of some remark. Lovely exefcise for the imaginary powers of your readers, and the story does not once let them down by being unclear or openly secretive. The device also nicely illustrates how much more important than the outside world their inside world is to them right then.
Lovely!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think this whole fic was my muse's revenge for "Cold Shower". I'm glad this works. for a moment I was worried if I left this a bit too vague. :)

Awww Logan doesn't get it, does he *sniffles*