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Reviews For Tongue-Tied
Reviewer: Mini Funk Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2013 7:33:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 02/11/2013 7:33:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story! There were a few parts that were confusing, like first Logan is sitting on the bed and next he's laying down, but there was nothing to say that had changed... and first Marie was taking a step backwards, but then she was turning back around to face Logan (I thought she was already facing him??)... Just some small things to fix to make your story flow better!!!
Good job!
Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2009 5:51:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 08/07/2009 5:51:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
No better place in the world to sleep, in my opinion!!! Nice story, I really liked it.
Reviewer: irishekl Signed 
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Date: 03/27/2007 3:30:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 03/27/2007 3:30:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I remember reading this story on the old WRFA, it was really good. I keep reading it. I hope you write more in the future!