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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 5:28:30 PM Title: So Long And Goodnight

I like a person who's so dedicated and loves their work! I'm sure Mystique will be up for promotion in no time!!

As a fellow author, I appreciate your research into poisons and toxins to lend authenticity to your writing. But the authenticity of that roach trap of a diner was just a little too much!! Glad it's still several hours until dinner - I'm suddenly not very hungry.

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 3:00:45 AM Title: 'Look What Came A-Crawling...'

I never thought I would say this, but... GO MYSTIQUE!!!

Author's Response: Ya gotta love the blue bitch, especially when she's being a sadistic blue bitch!

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Date: 07/03/2007 12:51:42 PM Title: 'Look What Came A-Crawling...'

Yeah, almost!!

Refresh mymemory, is this the first we've seen Mystique in the fic? If so, when're we gonna find out why she's so pissed?? Huh? Huh? When? When?

And just how much of a mistake are you gonna make it, that Logan and Marie have split up? Ya gonna start the torture of your readers again, rr?

Author's Response: This is the first we've seen of Mystique in this fic, but she'll be playing her part soon enough, she's got a lot of scores to settle, the inventors of the cure that left her useless, Magneto for abandoning her and well let's jus' say she always did have a thing for Logan *g* The blue bitch is back! Logan and Marie splitting up, ah'd say that was more of a tactical manoeuvere from Marie who's worryingly beginning to think more like Arrington every day, *three steps ahead*

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Date: 06/28/2007 8:24:59 PM Title: Sink Or Swim

A/N - [wanting] Logan to take his shirt *off...off...off*

*sigh* now there's a mental picture!! Thank you!!



Author's Response: Whoo hell yeah, an oiled up Logan and a handful of dollar bills, all together now *off...off...off!*

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 1:52:56 AM Title: Sink Or Swim

Damn, it is just so hard to make a decision with a bunch of bickering voices in your head! Good chapter, action, suspense, and a happy/ slighty leaning towards naughty ending. Good job. :)

Author's Response: Yup, with Arrington and Charles up there, it's a bit like havin' a three pronged Jekyll and Hyde, as well as throwing in a reckless Marie! :)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 4:44:25 PM Title: Sink Or Swim

Oh! rr! Thank you so much! I loved this chapter, simply loved it!

Ya had me going there a couple of times, I'll be honest! But I'm so glad you brought in the Prof to convince Rogue to go back for Logan - THEN - you even give us a teaser with *her* needing *his* body heat to survive! Nothin' like ending a chapter with partially clothed main characters!! Thanks!!

oh, and I'm sorry to have called you predictable, but I sort of thought you'd want to know, I would at least!

Author's Response: LOL, no need to apologise ct_xfan, I would like to know if a story was getting boring or predictable, I'd hate the idea that readers would know exactly what was gonna happen in a fic, it would kill me not bein' able to throw in a couple of nasty surprises to keep y'all on your toes! *g* I'm glad you liked this chapter, the little muse inside was jumpin' up and down throughout like a desperate housewife in a strip joint shouting for Logan to take his shirt *off...off...off*

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 5:41:18 AM Title: Old Friends...Same Fight

AAAAhhhhhh!!!!

Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Ok jus' breathe....

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 3:49:18 PM Title: Old Friends...Same Fight

Ya know something, rr? You've had so damn many cliffies in this fic, I'm almost getting bored with them. As soon as "the heavy rains had swollen the river to more than twice its size, " I knew you were gonna toss 'em into it. You're getting predictable, dear!

Author's Response: Now there's a review no writer wants to read, yeah I was gonna chuck 'em into the river but the cliffies should slow down a little now, maybe...but I like the idea of how many different ways can ya take 'em to the edge without actually dropping them in...the last thing I want or need is to become predictable...harsh!!

Author's Response: Geez ct_xfan predictable huh? jus' for that I'm aiming the nect cliffie right between your eyes, LOL *g*

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Date: 06/19/2007 2:35:16 PM Title: The Great Southern Invasion

"They didn’t see the soldiers climb down from their trucks, or see them shake hands with Eddie."

OH!! F*CK!!

That's it, rr, that is exactly the phrase that fell from my lips, out loud mind you, when I read that last sentence. You and these friggin' cliffies! You're gonna have me putt-putt-puttin' my little steam train around the bend if ya don't get ta moving this fic along!

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Date: 06/06/2007 1:15:05 PM Title: Seeing A Man 'Bout A Car

OOOOOOOOooooooo! That Arrington really is one nasty sonuvabee-yatch, isn't he? Is there no one he gives a damn about except himself? What's keeping Xavier from just getting inside his head and fryin' him from the inside out???

And BTW, rr, just how close are we to that overweight female's solo, huh?

Author's Response: I like to think he's over compensating for being cursed with the world's smallest d*ck...it accounts for all his evil LOL! *g* Though he is staring daggers into my back right now so *scary* As to the fat lazy and her solo, well we just don't know who she's going to be singing for...

Author's Response: *lady*...I meant lady, though I am feeling uber lazy today, haven't written anything in ages....

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Date: 05/27/2007 9:50:17 PM Title: A Faith You Can Understand

oh, Oh, OH! rawrave! I thought you were going around the bend with that nut-case, battle-addicted general....and yeah, you are. But how the f*ck did he get Xavier?? That's so far around the bend I can check my neck to see if it came clean in the shower this morning!!

"but meanwhile ah like the idea of a fight better, ain’t nothin’ like seeing blood spilt…"...that's the general, isn't it?? Rogue may have been many things, but a killer only for the sake of killing wasn't one of 'em!

"‘Good evening Professor Xavier…’
please, Please, PLEASE tell me that if they get the Prof into Marie's head he's only gonna HELP her?!?!? He'll HELP her get all the sh*t figured and straightened out? RIGHT!?!?!

Oh, and one last thing...I'm glad you're warning us about the next chappie, but remember; I will find you if necessary! (grins evilly and rubs hand together menacingly) So just make sure that chapter 15 is ready right on the heels of 14 - FOR ALL OF OUR SAKES!!


Author's Response: You do know I write this story when a)mostly pissed out of my head, or b) high on substances that are illegal for a good reason... LOL, thanks for the fb, I like Arrington, he's a sick little fuck, but he sure is thorough, covering all angles. Professor Xavier, phew he sure took a risk when he transferred his conscience into a terminally ill patient, the so-called resulting 'miraculous recovery' just had to be investigated, and just who would happen to be in charge of said investigation? Yep, one sick b*stard General Arrington. The next chappie will explain all as well as an evil cliffie to get your blood racing. Hey don't blame me, I've been gorging on the masters of suspense writing, Andy Remic and Chris Mooney, seriously 'World Without End' is a killer book, talk 'bout nail-biting! *o*

Author's Response: I joke 'bout bein' severely intoxicated when writing this fic, I happen to be only slightly intoxicated, not saying it's necessary but hey it helps! *g*

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2007 1:19:48 PM Title: A Faith You Can Understand

Oh shit and derision!!!!

Have I mentioned that I love this!!!

Author's Response: Shit and derision, tee-hee, definitely the best way to describe Loves dirty little angel. *g*

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 4:28:02 AM Title: Sweet Surrender

OMG! Another nail biting chapter. Keep it coming!!

Author's Response: LOL, I'll try :) I liked the idea of having a small but significant cliffie hanging on a single word, 'Liar...'

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 10:22:08 PM Title: Sweet Surrender

AW!!! rr! I'm so honored that you were thinking of me while writing this most recent chapter! And what a lovely, almost cliffie-free chapter it is! Yes, most definitely not all that painful; my congrats!

Now, just remember those untold tortures that will follow my hunting you down, if I find it to be necessary to hunt you down, after any forthcoming chapters!!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks, glad you didn't find it all too miserable! I had thoughts about leaving it that point where Marie has the gun pressed to her head and pulls the trigger. I almost did stop writing there, but then found I'd been far too cruel with the cliffie's already, and how annoyed I would be if I was the one reading the story and the writer just stopped there! Murderous thoughts would not even begin to cut it, so I took pity on all of you! As for forthcoming chapters can't promise they'll be cliffie-free, but I'll post a warning! LOL :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 9:26:43 PM Title: The Better Half Of Me....?

I actually like this cliffhanger...am I weird? But it keeps the drama and the anticipation high but it also leaves plenty of hope. I'm TRUSTING that you won't kill Marie or Logan....get that? 'trusting'. *hinthint* :D

Author's Response: Killing Marie or Logan, now honestly would I do that to you after all the tension and angst I've put you reader through? Well alright yeah I would....but I'm not going to...maybe, probably...

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Date: 05/14/2007 3:52:34 PM Title: All Night Long

AWwwww! Damn you, rr!! Another of those damn nasty, angsty, horridly stomach clenching cliffies!! Can't ya cut us a break just once in a while, dammit???

I'm on that same edge with sharonmjl47, but I'm leaning a bit towards the opposite of GOD-like!! You're fast approaching the city limit of Damnable Demon Devil!!!

C'mon with the f*ckin' updates already!!!



Author's Response: Damnable Demon Devil huh? Yep guess I can live with that! Maybe the next chappie won't be as much as a cliffie, *maybe*, LOL. But I'm not promising anything. Just that I'll try and get onto writing the next part as soon as possible. :)

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2007 3:01:00 PM Title: The Better Half Of Me....?

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!!!!!!
I am sitting on the end of my seat and wetting myself at the tension and the absolute brutality of it. I fucking love this story and I think at the moment you are a GOD!!

Author's Response: *Blush* LOL thanks for the compliment :) I'm glad you like the story, the tension is certainly up there, think there's a sadistic part of me that wants to crank it up 'til someone bursts a vein! And that'll probably end up being me! LOL

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2007 1:05:53 PM Title: Collateral Damage

woah! that was informative yet i still need to know more! Great chapter. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, LOL

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Date: 05/10/2007 12:33:27 PM Title: Collateral Damage

>‘What makes ya think you’re talking’ to Marie…?’

Ooooo! So unfair! Nasty, horrible, angsty place to end a chappie, rr!! Please tell me the next one is gonna be up soon? I'm chewin' m'fingernails down to the quick!!



Author's Response: I know...I just seem to be getting worse with those horrible cliffie ending chappie's, LOL sry 'bout that! I'll try to hammer out the next part as soon as possible *g*

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2007 6:14:19 AM Title: The Nights And Hands That Shaped Me

There has to be a cure against ciffhangerirtis somewhere...

Good chapter!

Author's Response: There is its called kicking-the-ass-of-author-until-she-hammers-out-another-chapter-damn-soon! LOL.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2007 7:34:08 PM Title: The Nights And Hands That Shaped Me

That wasn't as bad as a cliffhanger. I'll let you live for this one. *g* That Logan is do dedicated, sweet man. But are we gonna find out WHY the military wants her? I have my ideas.... :)

Author's Response: Phew, I'm tired of running from all you cliffie haters haha LOL :) Poor Marie she'd popular with all the wrong sort of people, and the military wanting her can never be a good thing. But she's Marie, gun-toting, kick-ass Southern gal, she ain't gonna make it easy for them to take her that's for damn sure!

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Date: 04/30/2007 5:49:21 AM Title: Move Toward The Light

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaahhhhhhhhhh evil so evil - those kind of cliffhangers should be illegal!

Author's Response: I know..sorry :P

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 5:16:47 AM Title: Like All Of Us, Lost Until We Are Found

*runs off to read next chapter*

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Date: 04/30/2007 5:09:21 AM Title: Never Gonna Get Drunk Enough

Awww finally some tears.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2007 4:52:35 AM Title: Lost Little Girl All Grown Up

*sigh*

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