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Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2007 4:36:25 AM Title: Chapter 19

I swear, this story just gets better and better (other than Logan leaving and being a jerk about it!). I'm starting to really like Creed. AUGH!

Author's Response: I know! This Creed grows on you. It's scary.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 10:55:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

One more thing, does anybody in the mansion know what the hell is going on? LOL.

Author's Response: We did think of that, and from the emotions in the team meeting that time, they know something is up. Well, that and the wrecked kitchen - but they don't know exactly. We're gonna keep them in the dark, because to write what they might think would have us at about 5 extra chapters ;) Let's assume there's a lot of "WTF?"s floating around the mansion. :)

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 8:11:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

That was intense. I really liked Victor in this chapter,I felt bad for him.

Poor Rogue, I can't imagine how she must feel right now. I hope Logan comes back soon or at least calls her. He can be such an ass sometimes!

Can't wait for the new chapter.

Author's Response: Ah Logan always comes back :) He can be a stubborn ass, but he'll get there...one day. Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 5:11:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

What! Okay ladies, you have left us with some pretty mean cliffhangers but this one.....I cannot even figure out the outcome of this one.
Damn Logan! And I feel a lot for Victor and of course Rogue as well! Oh man, this just sucks for all of them. What a heartbreaking chapter. Please tell me things are going to look up in the next two chapters!! (or if not, you could always write a few more chappies after that. ;-)

Author's Response: Well things may look sideways in the next chapter then maybe up a little in the last one. We don't really do sad endings...but we also don't do "walk off into the sunset" endings - but I promise we won't leave you all heart broken. :)

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 2:06:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

Never thought Victors words could ring so true, or taht he'd ever be a comfort to anyone.
Scary that I've heard that mantra so many times before, 'Never, NEVER, show them your weakness! You show them weakness and you're finished."
But he's right, she is a leader, it hurts but she has responsibility to the rest if the team.
Go Victor! *g*

Author's Response: Yeah, who knew that Victor might give Rogue insight? Into all kinds of things.

Reviewer: black widow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2007 1:39:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

I wonna know what happens! Both of ya'll are killing me here!

Author's Response: We don't wanna kill you! It's almost over :)

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2007 4:51:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ladies, am I missing something? It is Sunday, April 22nd and as far as I can tell there has been no update since April 16th! Umm, where was Thursday's? Are we going to have Monday's tomorrow? Not trying to be pushy here but the anticipation is seriously getting to me....Like, I am driving my husband and friends insane going "Oh, I think there was meant to be an update up already." ..."Hmmm, still no update."...."I NEED an update!" :-P Hoping to see something up soon!!!

Author's Response: It's up now :) sorry for the delay. Angst ahoy my dear!

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 2:17:04 PM Title: Chapter 18

NOOOOOO!
Gah, Logan leaving her like that???? :(
But I guess I can understand it, Logan has always worked hard to cage that beast within, the idea to him that he could lose it like that with the girl he's cared about for so long must be devastating for him.
He needs to reconcile the parts of him that will him to lose control and the part that wants to hold back, to be gentle and as tender he believes Rogue needs him to be.
He's got a struggle ahead, breaking Rogue's heart like that has to be just as painful for him. Look forward to the next chapter and reading 'bout Logan's struggle, but is that right only 3 more to go?!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 8:35:37 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG!!!! You are killing me!! I was like all flushed and giddy for the H-O-T scene (blushing right now thinking about it!) and then WTFreak!?! Logan leaves! I just don't know about him sometimes.
What does this mean for Victor? (We have three more chapters only? Or are there more? *nods yes please!*)
Well, as usual, another Superb chapter! Cannot wait until Thursday!!!

Author's Response: Only three chps left, yes. Logan doesn't know about himself sometimes either. That's why he's gotta figure it out. And I'm glad you liked the H.O.T.ness :)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 1:51:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh, man. Am humbled. No longer enjoying the doom. You guys! Meanies. Poor Rogue and Logan and poor, poor Victor.

I didn't want it to happen. Was peeking through my fingers the entire time, because I was expecting something like Logan's leaving at the end here. And I knew how very badly that would go. I don't know that Rogue thought it was fixed, but she thought it was fixable. But Logan - he's lacking in a bit of hope, actually, and that makes him act in these ways.

I wonder what their misunderstanding at the end of this chapter says about their relationship. Logan needs to leave. Rogue needs to be able to tell him how much it means before he does. Do they not know each other well enough - because there's a huge difference between friendship (one based more on connection than real confidences) and a romantic relationship? Is it that they don't trust each other enough, or trust themselves? Are they simply in too much pain to register the pain in the other?

Because I'm seeing real doom-y doom now. Because Logan deals with things by going into deep denial and suffering. And Rogue prods and pokes and provokes and puts herself out there until she can't bear it anymore, and she lashes out and seeks comfort elsewhere. That line: "Fine ... how about I make it real easy for you, Logan," she said...ouch. Poor Logan, even if he deserves it. And don't think I've forgotten that a very crushed and wounded (and angry) Victor is still at the mansion.

*sighs* Oh, dear. Is this a greek tragedy by any chance? *lol* *pets them all*

Author's Response: And the sad part is, it is just like Logan to leave to figure things out. It's not that he doesn't want it, he's got to come to terms with it. Rogue only sees the man she wants, the man she slept with, leaving her. Of course that's all she'd see b/c it's happening to her. But maybe, after a little time apart, a little reflection for both of them, and a hurt third party that only knows how to give it to people b/t the eyes - they may gain a little insight. Perhaps?

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 9:59:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

The moment that we have all been waiting for and he runs, nooooooooooooooo! Poor Rogue, I can't imagine how she must feel at the moment. I love how you and Laenwyn make all the characters come alive in this story. I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment :) I wish it could have ended with just the hot sex, but there's more to tell and more laundry to air.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 9:54:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh ya'll are just mean! I thought I had happiness, I thought I had closer and 'happily ever after'. But noooooooooooo. Gah! Forget Rogue, MY poor emotions. *sigh* K, next chapter. *g* :D

Author's Response: I know, Logan upset me too. I wanted to end it after the hot sex...stubborn muses! There's still a bit more to tell.

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 9:39:25 AM Title: Chapter 17

Can understand Creed's frustration, but did he really say 'the fucking runt tried to take what belonged to Victor Creed?'
Creed laying claim to any woman, let alone Rogue, guess she got to him more than either of them realised.
And Logan pounding the shit of Creed, geez that was certainly expected but now that he knows, just what will happen to Rogue? Gal...you're in trouble...
The biting of the nails goes on, at this rate I won't have any fingers left to chew! :0
Still look forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: you got it, she's got to him more than anyone realized. next chapter is up though so you can see what happens :)

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 11:29:54 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh, poor Victor! I can't help but feel for him a bit. AND he was the one who got her the sexy-sorry knickers! Oh man, the plot thickens! What is going to happen next?!! I can hardly stand it!
P.S. I like this sort of hardline Scott. He said "ass." hehe

Author's Response: sexy sorry knickers. LOL, that made me smile! I like hard Scott too. Go Scott!

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 8:38:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh no! I hope Victor doesn't spoil anything.

How old is Rogue in this story and do you think she will get Carol Danvers powers?

I am very excited for the next chapter. Awesome work :)

Author's Response: We pictured her to be no older than mid 20's, but not a teen. So, it's obscure...but say 22/23-ish??? No kick ass Rogue powers in this fic, but perhaps in a later one. I think if she did have Carol's powers, then everybody had better run for cover!!!

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 6:57:22 PM Title: Chapter 16

God the tension, its a killer, biting my nails all the way through that meeting, waiting for Creed to do the inevitable and tell all.
And you know what, just a little bit of me wished he had, Rogue treated him pretty badly, and Creed the asshole that he can be, is mightily sexy when he's all hurt and fighting hard to pretend he isn't.
Look forward to next chapter :)

Author's Response: I agree, tough guy with wounded pride Creed is pretty sexy. You'll see what happens on Thursday! :)

Reviewer: Gersemi Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 5:05:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

What's he gonna do, indeed!

Oh, this was just purrfect! I can picture Vic's jealousy, Rogue's unease and Logan's general cluelessness all too well. It's like back in high school, only with powers.

Author's Response: I guess they are technically in a school :) Check back on Thursday. woo weee.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 3:46:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

Aw, no body ever listens to Scott. Somebody's in trouble... *cough*Rogue*cough* :D

Author's Response: Maybe Scott ought to just blast a whole down the table to get the proper respect. and yeah...somebody is definitely in trouble.

Reviewer: black widow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 3:32:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh that was good! I wonna know more!

Author's Response: Thursday is coming soon!!!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 8:16:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh man, oh man!!
Ahh, poor Logan but poor Victor as well! And poor Rogue....you ladies are being a bit cruel teasing them all (especially Victor). Super hot chapter but hope there is some definite resolution to the sexual tension soon!
Again, another superb chapter!!

Author's Response: Oh you know we won't leave you hanging forever! With all the build up there's gotta be good pay off. Thanks for the fb.

Reviewer: black widow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 12:17:43 AM Title: Chapter 14

That was so good! I can't wait to find out what happens next. You know I love Logan and all but a sad part of me wants Creed to win. I guess I just like to see the under dog win once in awhile. Be a good twist too. But in the end Logan will get her, I just know it!

Author's Response: you can't help but feel a little something for Victor, huh? Good, that's intentional :) We titled it Torn for a reason. They all have their own internal struggles and continue to deny either what they want or who they are. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2007 12:03:23 AM Title: Chapter 14

I like this, because Vicky-Boy didn't get any :) Can't wait for the bomb to drop, and I think I can hear it falling.... *opens TEAM WOLVERINE umbrella*

Author's Response: Team Wolverine umbrella ... I like that. yep, you can hear it falling alright.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 11:23:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was a hot chapter. I can't wait for the next one! The suspense will kill me..Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I'm happy that you're enjoying it. We're just now getting to the good stuff too!

Reviewer: black widow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2007 4:49:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

EEEWWWww... This is turning out to be so good!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! let me guess, to make Logan mad she hooks up with Creed! Oh I love that, hooking up with Logan's enemey! Love it, Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy you guys are enjoying it. I get all giddy reading the reviews, like I'm right there with you, even though I already know what happens :)

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2007 4:23:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

NOOOOO! How can this chapter be so short?! And how can Logan be such a manwhore?!! :-P Oooo, and is Rogue going to be naughty with Victor and then we can have a jealous Logan on our hands?!.....Oh man, Thursday cannot come soon enough!

Author's Response: Don't you just love Jealous!Logan? I do!

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