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Reviewer: PerfectlyPaired Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2020 7:30:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow. Just wow...
I've always been a die hard wolverine/rogue shipper fan....I wouldn't have imagined a story being written to genuinely make me wish, at least, just this once she had picked someone else.
There was such a genuine love there between her and Victor.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2009 12:30:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

"If Logan was her sun, then maybe Victor was like the moon. It fit him, to be shrouded in darkness, constantly waxing and waning, able to manipulate her tides so easily."

ok, this may sound cliche put that was absolutely poetic!

and i feel bad for Victor...did i just say that out loud?

i loved loved looooved this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so so much for the sweet FB =) It makes us happy to see new readers discover this 'baby' of ours. We had a lot of fun writing this story (btw, Skyblueray did a WRFA interview a while back, and in it she talks quite a bit about Torn). I really hope it comes across. Also, Torn is actually the first out of three installments. If you want to know what happened post-Torn, you'll find 'Beyond Redemption' and the last one, 'Amaranthine' on our livejournal website, fic_den. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Morleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2009 2:15:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

Well, I can't remember a w/r fiction that put me on such an emotional rollercoaster!
I was horrified at the sexual harassment endured by Rogue from Sabretooth, angry at any sort of romantic relationship between the two, frustrated by Wolverine's lack of action, railed against any humanity exhibited in Sabertooth, and then the ending came.
I was so wound up over the whole thing, I didn't know whether I liked it or not.
Then I realized that's exactly what an author is supposed to do: don't spare them, don't treat them like children, take them on a journey that challenges everything they think they knew.
In the end, this really was an amazing story. And I'm so very glad I read it.
Job well done.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 12:23:16 PM Title: Chapter 21

This was stunning in its sensuality and beauty. It made a gorgeous mess to read and follow. Thank you for it. It is a favorite now. Thank you.

~Mia

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2008 6:48:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

I love this story, it's my favourite by far. Much as I love Logan, Victor really added adds a lot and the portrayal of both men was so great here.

Really enjoyed how Rogue couldn't help but be attracted to both men and Victor's incessant stalking of Rogue really added spice. I found Victor's anger in chapter 16 particularly memorable with that line:
"You think he'd mind? Do you think *I* mind?! Do you?!”
and then his pain in chapter 19 when he begs Rogue to hurt him instead.

By the end I couldn't help but feel that Victor deserved Rogue more than Logan did after all his efforts and I was really sad that Logan was allowed to worm his way back and Victor left.
Sob.

Great story and so well told. Awesome job!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Writing this is also responsible for making me a full blown Creed admirer. Okay, so I was already, but this outted me and solidified them as my OT3. Happy we could entertain you. :) thanks again!

Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 11:29:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

This is the second time I've read the story from start to finish. It really is fabulously written. And a great concept to boot! And my god... but it turned me into a traitor... in the end I totally wanted her to fall in love with Creed... how messed up is that.

There were a lot of really well written passages that were just heart-wrenchingly accurate and brutally honest. I felt like you guys really got Rogue and Logan's characters right. Their insecurities, secret desires, etc. And you kept the whole story intense and sexual, but none of it seemed over the top or unbelievable. Which is another feat in itself.

Most of the time, a story that is only based on the relationship tends to be kinda dull and predictable (and sometimes cheesy). This was absolutely nothing like that. This has to be one of the best relationship centered stories I've seen written.

Excellent work! A great read (both times!)

Author's Response: How did I miss responding to your comment??? So sorry.rnrnAnyway, thank you for reading. It thrills us when people enjoy what we worked so hard on and leave remarks. We really appreciate the feedback and I'm glad we could get the story across without becoming trite or cheesy. :) Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Amoraluv Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 1:42:53 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow!!!
I'm totally going to look for more Sabertooth and Rogue stories after reading this

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