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Reviewer: PerfectlyPaired Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2020 7:30:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow. Just wow...
I've always been a die hard wolverine/rogue shipper fan....I wouldn't have imagined a story being written to genuinely make me wish, at least, just this once she had picked someone else.
There was such a genuine love there between her and Victor.

Reviewer: Lionel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2012 5:07:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2011 12:35:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh Logan. Bad. Very Bad. Men are stupid and dumb and just plain confusing.

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2011 12:31:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh Logan. Bad. Very Bad. Men are stupid and dumb and just plain confusing.

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2011 12:31:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh Logan. Bad. Very Bad. Men are stupid and dumb and just plain confusing.

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2011 9:02:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh, find someone else Rogue! I totally know how you feel and what you want to do, but not with Victor. Choose Colossus or something. Not Victor. That will just make things worse . . .

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2011 9:02:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh, find someone else Rogue! I totally know how you feel and what you want to do, but not with Victor. Choose Colossus or something. Not Victor. That will just make things worse . . .

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2011 8:28:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

Are they finally going in the right direction? Stupid Victor! Stupid confusion! Grrrrr!

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2011 8:27:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

Are they finally going in the right direction? Stupid Victor! Stupid confusion! Grrrrr!

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2011 1:33:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm a little ashamed of myself because this is actually hot instead of disturbing, but I'm thinking Liev Schreiber, not Sabertooth from the first movie, so how can I help it?

Reviewer: elwren75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2011 1:02:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am so excited to see how this plays out!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2009 12:30:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

"If Logan was her sun, then maybe Victor was like the moon. It fit him, to be shrouded in darkness, constantly waxing and waning, able to manipulate her tides so easily."

ok, this may sound cliche put that was absolutely poetic!

and i feel bad for Victor...did i just say that out loud?

i loved loved looooved this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so so much for the sweet FB =) It makes us happy to see new readers discover this 'baby' of ours. We had a lot of fun writing this story (btw, Skyblueray did a WRFA interview a while back, and in it she talks quite a bit about Torn). I really hope it comes across. Also, Torn is actually the first out of three installments. If you want to know what happened post-Torn, you'll find 'Beyond Redemption' and the last one, 'Amaranthine' on our livejournal website, fic_den. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2009 12:10:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

wow, i never thought i would feel sympathy for Sabertooth. amazing.

is it totally crazy of me to wish Rogue and Victor wind up together in this story? he seems to be there for her in a way Logan can't here!

bizarre and incredible story! love it!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 11:54:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

Victor moved his iron grip to her hands as he pressed them against his face, forcing her to cradle him. When he spoke his voice came out hoarse and vibrating out of repressed fury.

"I'm not asking, I'm telling you! Give me pain. Hurt me and make me bleed, angel. I know you want someone else to hurt. You've wanted to make me pay for weeks so fuckin' do it! Give me all that anger and drain me. If it will make you feel better then DO IT!"

ok, that was amazingly insightful in a totally Victor angry, masochistic way. you have captured the voice of Sabertooth in a way i've never read on this site before. he's angry, shallow, cruel but you've given him a true voice in spite of, or maybe because of, all that.

bravo! god, i love this story!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 11:45:07 PM Title: Chapter 18

logan is such a selfish stupid bastard! it's always about him and his guilt...never asking Rogue how she felt. he just assumes everything. GAH! i hate him at times like this...and this i love this portrayal at the same time b/c it shows the man fighting the baser beast.

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 11:26:01 PM Title: Chapter 17

woo hoo! fight fight fight! i knew it would come to this!

god, i love this story.

of course the sicko!Corinne in me wants them to share Rogue like the Higher Education series, but i know it won't work like that in this story...will it?

i think you've done a FANTASTIC job of exploring Victor's thoughts and whatever feelings he has in regards to Rogue and how she's used him. we dcon't often see into Sabertooth's mind on this site but you've done an awesome job!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 10:36:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

bwahahahaha! the evi!Corinne in me is allll ready for Rogue to revenge fuck Victor!

god, this is such a great story, i can't believe i didn't find it sooner!

Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 9:32:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

i just found this story and GAH! hotness! something of the sicko in me enjoys the occasional Rogue-Sabertooth pairing...probably b/c it often ends with Rogue and Wolverine having hot fights and makeup bonking LOL!

must rush to next chapter!

Reviewer: Morleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2009 2:15:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

Well, I can't remember a w/r fiction that put me on such an emotional rollercoaster!
I was horrified at the sexual harassment endured by Rogue from Sabretooth, angry at any sort of romantic relationship between the two, frustrated by Wolverine's lack of action, railed against any humanity exhibited in Sabertooth, and then the ending came.
I was so wound up over the whole thing, I didn't know whether I liked it or not.
Then I realized that's exactly what an author is supposed to do: don't spare them, don't treat them like children, take them on a journey that challenges everything they think they knew.
In the end, this really was an amazing story. And I'm so very glad I read it.
Job well done.

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 12:23:16 PM Title: Chapter 21

This was stunning in its sensuality and beauty. It made a gorgeous mess to read and follow. Thank you for it. It is a favorite now. Thank you.

~Mia

Reviewer: VampOrchid Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2009 12:29:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

Damn it - now he was sounding like Scott. Fucking pansy.

LOVED THAT PART LOL

Author's Response: =) Sky's responsible for that one, and I love it too.

Reviewer: Ms_H_Wallbanger Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2009 9:21:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Geez, I never thought I would be lusting after Victor Creed. But you sure pulled me wrong!

Good job constructing a character who definitely grew over the story.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2008 6:48:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

I love this story, it's my favourite by far. Much as I love Logan, Victor really added adds a lot and the portrayal of both men was so great here.

Really enjoyed how Rogue couldn't help but be attracted to both men and Victor's incessant stalking of Rogue really added spice. I found Victor's anger in chapter 16 particularly memorable with that line:
"You think he'd mind? Do you think *I* mind?! Do you?!”
and then his pain in chapter 19 when he begs Rogue to hurt him instead.

By the end I couldn't help but feel that Victor deserved Rogue more than Logan did after all his efforts and I was really sad that Logan was allowed to worm his way back and Victor left.
Sob.

Great story and so well told. Awesome job!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Writing this is also responsible for making me a full blown Creed admirer. Okay, so I was already, but this outted me and solidified them as my OT3. Happy we could entertain you. :) thanks again!

Reviewer: Dita Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2007 11:29:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

This is the second time I've read the story from start to finish. It really is fabulously written. And a great concept to boot! And my god... but it turned me into a traitor... in the end I totally wanted her to fall in love with Creed... how messed up is that.

There were a lot of really well written passages that were just heart-wrenchingly accurate and brutally honest. I felt like you guys really got Rogue and Logan's characters right. Their insecurities, secret desires, etc. And you kept the whole story intense and sexual, but none of it seemed over the top or unbelievable. Which is another feat in itself.

Most of the time, a story that is only based on the relationship tends to be kinda dull and predictable (and sometimes cheesy). This was absolutely nothing like that. This has to be one of the best relationship centered stories I've seen written.

Excellent work! A great read (both times!)

Author's Response: How did I miss responding to your comment??? So sorry.rnrnAnyway, thank you for reading. It thrills us when people enjoy what we worked so hard on and leave remarks. We really appreciate the feedback and I'm glad we could get the story across without becoming trite or cheesy. :) Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Amoraluv Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 1:42:53 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow!!!
I'm totally going to look for more Sabertooth and Rogue stories after reading this

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