Oh, girl, you look nothing like an idiot, I can assure you. This wonderful little fic makes you look like a talented writer I would very much like to see write lots more stories.

I wouldn't have to tell you about where I wanted to travel because I wouldn't want to be anywhere else.

This line makes me wonder what other places she told him she wanted to go before she worked up her nerve and got around to talking about Toronto, a place she thought he might want to go with her.

'Tony the imaginary hot dog vendor' -- fantastic.

So glad he said, 'Yes'. --Wendie

Beautiful, simple, easy going slice of Joe and Jane Anybody life. Brava, my dear.