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Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 9:01:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hello Hotness!! Okay first off, couldn't believe that Victor shagged some skankbag right in front of Rogue! And I can totally feel for her while being in love (and obviously attracted)to Logan and at the same time being drawn despite herself to Victor. (Oh if only we all had such difficult decisions to make! LOL)
Then Logan said he was sorry: hooray! And gave Rogue sexy knickers: Double Hooray! And then got her off: Whoo hey!! :-P That was seriously flush-worthy. Can't wait for when they get to the REALLY good stuff!! hehe

Author's Response: Well Victor may have his reasons for doing what he did, but I agree it was about time Logan came to his senses and apologized. The end? *wags finger* ...there are still 6 chapters left remember ...

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 6:27:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Damn it Scott, always with the wrong moments and emergencies! Just when I was thinking finally...
LOL great chapter, looking forward to more!

Reviewer: black widow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 1:27:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

hahaha....poor Scott!Lol

Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 12:56:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

GRR thanks Scott! Way to ruin it :(

Well I still liked ::does victory dance:: woot for Roganess

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 10:10:57 AM Title: Chapter 15

I swear, this Rogue girl is a pain in the arse and all the way up to the tonsils!
She's confusing lust and love, she's demanding loyalty where she doesn't grant it, she wants companionship from a guy to whom she went for pleasure alone and she demands sincerety when she is playing little games.
I am quite run out of patience here, and I am beginning to think that she's a long way from becoming enough of a woman for ANY mature relationship. Guh.

Having said this, it's a great story - I didn't follow it so far, but got taken in just a few chapters ago and have now read it in one go - great job!

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 10:10:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

I swear, this Rogue girl is a pain in the arse and all the way up to the tonsils!
She's confusing lust and love, she's demanding loyalty where she doesn't grant it, she wants companionship from a guy to whom she went for pleasure alone and she demands sincerety when she is playing little games.
I am quite run out of patience here, and I am beginning to think that she's a long way from becoming enough of a woman for ANY mature relationship. Guh.

Having said this, it's a great story - I didn't follow it so far, but got taken in just a few chapters ago and have now read it in one go - great job!

Author's Response: =) Well both me and Sky wanted to paint a slightly different pic of Rogue, since she's almost always portrayed as the victim, the silent girl waiting and pining for Logan, the submissive girl etc etc. ComicRogue is not MovieRogue, she's older, more confident, and perhaps more human too - she makes mistakes, makes the wrong choices sometimes. In short she too tend to fuck things up, that's not just something that the men do. So we knew we were going to get all sorts of reactions regarding the characters, basically because most people seem to be used to them behaving in a certain way. Glad you like our conflicted trio =) More coming up on monday (and oh you might wanna check under Skybluerae's penname because I'll be MIA any day soon ... there's a baby on the way =))

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2007 10:03:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

You can't stop there!!!! I am so glad that Logan fianlly came to his senses. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Does Rogue have Carol Danvers powers in this story?

Author's Response: Oh yes we can =) And no Rogue doesn't have her powers in this fic. More on monday =)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 12:51:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh, Rogue. She's so unhappy. I think she's finally beginning to see: she can have it all but not everything. Maybe Logan will *always* be closed off to her, will always feel guilty about it when he breaks, because he can't forgive Wolverine himself. Maybe Victor will *always* give his body to her, even control to her, but he'll never quite give himself. She's so unhappy in this chapter, even though she's finally beginning to see all the things she wants. And I fear that there's a lot more heartbreak to come for her. Poor Rogue.

I feel so guilty because - hehe - I feel for Victor next. Because he knew why she came to him. He knows he's second best for her, and tonight, I think maybe in the way he wanted to see her face while she blew him, the way he could see what she wanted, and the way he so easily gave her control, let her see all she did to him - I think he may want to be able to see all that in her, too. But she'll never be quite that open with him, because she's fascinated by him. But she doesn't love him. Poor Victor. Perhaps the hate hasn't begun yet, but I think it will.

I can't quite pinpoint why I feel less sorry for Logan. Maybe it's because I expect more from him as the potential boyfriend role instead of the potential fuck. Maybe it's because he's doing most of the holding-up-the-story as far as I can see. But when he says things like, "You want a man who comes to you after fight groupies?" I just want to smack him. Low. And unfair. And I get so tired when his own fear makes him ask things like, "Does he make you happy?" - because that's low and unfair in a different way. And it tears Rogue apart.

So maybe - poor Logan. Maybe that *is* his tragedy. That he makes his tragedy for himself. *pets him* :(

Great stuff, guys. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: black widow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 12:22:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

EGH!!! The irony of it all!

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 10:27:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

Excellent!! I really hope things work out between her and Logan and I hope he doesn't find out about Victor! That wouldn't be good. As usual eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Have a great weekend.

Reviewer: Azurevault Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 10:15:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

oh no... so sad, everyone's using each other... but it's weird, i almost kinda felt bad for victor creed, until he started his leering again. can't wait for the next bit!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 9:06:23 AM Title: Chapter 13

OMG!!!! Okay totally HOT to start off with Victor (WHOA!!) and then Logan as well and then at the end I was screaming "No,Logan you fool!" Oh man, what a rollercoaster ride this chapter was. THis updating only twice a week is killing me!
P.S. You both are still total genuises!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 7:12:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, Vicky boy actually came out looking better in this chapter than Logan did. What with having a good time but not 'taking advantage' of her 'momentary weakness'. And poor Logan was just sad and drunk... my poor baby.

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 7:10:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

"He's still a better choice than I am."

She laughed bitterly; if he only knew.
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Actually, no, I don't think she wishes he knew. I'm loving this fic and I'm loving Victor for some reason, because really I shouldn't. The way Logan is behaiving I'm so tempted to say 'Yeah let her fuck Victor', but only tempted.
Sharon.

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 10:40:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

Okay ladies (aka Goddesses), I am getting a bit stressed as it is Thursday evening and still no update! Yikes! I am going to keep on checking until shut-eye time. Please post ASAP--I NEED my fix!! :-P

Author's Response: sorry... my bad.... here's your fix though =)

Reviewer: Gersemi Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 3:09:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

Um, eek! That last sentence translates perfectly into "Trouble!".

Thank God tomorrow's Thursday.

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 10:23:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

This story just keeps getting better. Heck yeah, Vic is a hottie, even if a little mentally unstable. I say rock his boat! Worry about Logan later. Rogue has to end up with Logan, we all know that, but a little fun first is definitely in order.

Love the story. Eagerly awaiting the next installment. Thank you for the update.

Author's Response: Yes Rogue definitely needs to have some adult fun =) what with all that pent up anger and sexual frustration =) grrrr!!!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 11:10:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

Damn, sista's got the heat on high, doesn't she? I feel sorry for both Creed and Logan. Logan for the emotional damage she's probably gonna cause and Creed because she's probably gonna shred his hide with angry, angry payback sex (although I still hope not, cuz he just doesn't do if for me). *puts on TEAM WOLVERINE t-shirt* ^.~

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 10:37:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm glad that Rogue isn't crying over him, I can't wait to see what she does to make Logan jealous. He deserves it. I can't wait for Thursday!!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2007 12:39:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

What?! No update until Monday!! *grumble*....Oh well, guess I'll just have to go back and start reading again from the beginning. *Sigh*
Have I mentioned lately that you both are goddesses amongst women?...hmm, well you are!
Monday, hurry up!!



Author's Response: mondays and thursdays... and I don't mind being a Goddess =)

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 11:37:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

Uhhh....Whoa.*wipes HUGE puddle of drool away* So wait, Logan AND Victor AND Scott wet and inappropriately naked in the shower...Rogue, you lucky bitch! LOL!! Yeah, I would be having a big problem forming a coherent sentence or even words in general after that. Serious yum!
Yeah, isn't is Sunday yet? :-P

Author's Response: Yeah naked man flesh mmmm... who wouldn't lose the ability of speech walking in on those three taking a shower? ... and monday darling, you're gonna have to wait til monday for the next chapter =)

Reviewer: Gersemi Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 7:10:48 PM Title: Chapter 11

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For some reason, I can't think of anything appropriate to say. So I'll have to repeat myself - holy fuck. *fans self*

Gosh, I wanna grab Logan and shake some sense into him! *gaah* No one can be in denial this much, it's simply impossible, even for Mr Oblivious here.

Good thing I won't be home for the weekend, that way I can't stare at my mailbox all day waiting for you guys to update.

Author's Response: Maybe you don't have to grab mr Oblivious and smack him or whatever, I think he's going to cross that line sooner or later no matter how hard he's trying to fight it ... and you never know when that is =)

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 5:52:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

HOT! That was so hot. I can't wait to see what happens. You and your co-author are doing such a fabulous job, this is by far my favorite story EVER! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Ashnan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 4:48:39 PM Title: Chapter 11

I LOVE EVERY CHAPTER OF THIS FIC! I check my email everyday to see if it's been updated. This fic is a gift. Thank you so much. It's one of my all time favorites.

Author's Response: Awwwh =) glad you're enjoying it, and thank you so much for the sweet words =) I'm sending some V/R/L love your way for that! Next chapter should be up on monday.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2007 10:53:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

Can I just say I love that little trickle of water thing. So good! I had to best image of me shoving her out of the way and licking it off him myself! ^.~ Needless to say, another fabulous chapter.

Author's Response: Then mission accomplished =) Feel free to lick Wolverine's chest anytime you want *g*

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