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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2007 10:14:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

*watery eyed myself*

Uhm uhm... damn...

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 12:51:45 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh, Rogue. She's so unhappy. I think she's finally beginning to see: she can have it all but not everything. Maybe Logan will *always* be closed off to her, will always feel guilty about it when he breaks, because he can't forgive Wolverine himself. Maybe Victor will *always* give his body to her, even control to her, but he'll never quite give himself. She's so unhappy in this chapter, even though she's finally beginning to see all the things she wants. And I fear that there's a lot more heartbreak to come for her. Poor Rogue.

I feel so guilty because - hehe - I feel for Victor next. Because he knew why she came to him. He knows he's second best for her, and tonight, I think maybe in the way he wanted to see her face while she blew him, the way he could see what she wanted, and the way he so easily gave her control, let her see all she did to him - I think he may want to be able to see all that in her, too. But she'll never be quite that open with him, because she's fascinated by him. But she doesn't love him. Poor Victor. Perhaps the hate hasn't begun yet, but I think it will.

I can't quite pinpoint why I feel less sorry for Logan. Maybe it's because I expect more from him as the potential boyfriend role instead of the potential fuck. Maybe it's because he's doing most of the holding-up-the-story as far as I can see. But when he says things like, "You want a man who comes to you after fight groupies?" I just want to smack him. Low. And unfair. And I get so tired when his own fear makes him ask things like, "Does he make you happy?" - because that's low and unfair in a different way. And it tears Rogue apart.

So maybe - poor Logan. Maybe that *is* his tragedy. That he makes his tragedy for himself. *pets him* :(

Great stuff, guys. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: black widow Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 12:22:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

EGH!!! The irony of it all!

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 10:27:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

Excellent!! I really hope things work out between her and Logan and I hope he doesn't find out about Victor! That wouldn't be good. As usual eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Have a great weekend.

Reviewer: Azurevault Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 10:15:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

oh no... so sad, everyone's using each other... but it's weird, i almost kinda felt bad for victor creed, until he started his leering again. can't wait for the next bit!

Reviewer: CoCo82 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 9:06:23 AM Title: Chapter 13

OMG!!!! Okay totally HOT to start off with Victor (WHOA!!) and then Logan as well and then at the end I was screaming "No,Logan you fool!" Oh man, what a rollercoaster ride this chapter was. THis updating only twice a week is killing me!
P.S. You both are still total genuises!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 7:12:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, Vicky boy actually came out looking better in this chapter than Logan did. What with having a good time but not 'taking advantage' of her 'momentary weakness'. And poor Logan was just sad and drunk... my poor baby.

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 7:10:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

"He's still a better choice than I am."

She laughed bitterly; if he only knew.
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Actually, no, I don't think she wishes he knew. I'm loving this fic and I'm loving Victor for some reason, because really I shouldn't. The way Logan is behaiving I'm so tempted to say 'Yeah let her fuck Victor', but only tempted.
Sharon.

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