have you seen the movie "Like Water for Chocolate?" you really should, it's all about erotic food and the hold it can have on people. considering how well you write food in such a sexy way i bet you'd love that movie.

Queen of the Heart-Wrenching and Unexpected Twists.

*holds hands over heart* Oh!

WOW!!! Ok, angsty but incredible sweet also.

I like bima140277's version too.
Sorry, i'm a sucker for happy endings. :)

Author's Response: No clear ending means it's up to the reader to decide what happens next. You're quite entitled to your opinion. :)

I'm with bima140277!! Logan's an elderly grey-haired man, everyone else is gone too and he knows it won't be long before he's back in his beloved Marie's arms once again.

In the immortal words of Colin Raye...That's my story and I'm sticking to it!!!

Ok this is at least a hundred years after 'Sugar' and Logan is already old and will soon follow Marie... that's is how I see it and that's how it is *stomps foot, pouts*... or I'm gonna start bawling like a three year old *teary eyes, sniffling already*... and that's not a pretty sight...

Oh and I'm denying that I ever read this!


Author's Response: The best part of reading and writing fanfic: makebelief. And living in denial. :)

My favorite chapters were the first and this last one. In the first one, I felt so pervy, so dirty along with Logan in a good way. (The last line about the lollipop was *inspired* - perfect.) There was such innocence to it, because it was nearly unplanned, the beginning, almost going nowhere. And then I felt...I'm not sure...increasingly uneasy as I suspected Marie became more complicit. And somehow that felt sicker and dirtier and addictive - the moment when Marie wipes the chocolate off Logan's lips and tastes him and chocolate. It felt too cavity sweet and wrong and climbing darker as Marie and Bobby slowly spiraled into greater wrongness, which somehow still didn't make Marie and Logan *right*.

So I love that you brought it back to this moment, reliving all of his old fantasies, finding Marie underneath all the sweetness and the teasing, and this chapter is just so...guh!...wuh?...please, God, yes! Desire fulfilled and an undercurrent of proud need, I think. They both love wanting each other this much. Exploding passion. Release.

Wow! You are so good at these, Ara. Reminds me of Cravings, but I think...yes, indeed, I do like this more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I wouldn't talk about this one and Cravings in the same sentence, though... :)

“Enough of these games… Lets go home,”

Fer cryin' out loud!! I should say so!!!

"her eyes locked to your lips. She leans closer and when you feel her tongue sweeping over the sugar coating of your lower lip you close your eyes and bring your hands to cup her face, granting her tongue an entry, parting your lips just slightly."

Whether or not she knew about all of it from the beginning; it doesn't much matter now...(sic) we've entered a new realm of imagination. Another dimension - a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. We're moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. We've just crossed over into the Twilight Zone.

*Gah*..falls over...*thud*, so damn HOT, and for a sticky night like this, jus' perfect.

oh man what I wouldn't give to be Marie in this chapter. I am just getting sweaty just thinking about it. Can't wait till they get home! LOL Great chapter!!!

*drools*

:O~

Gah, their dentist must love them! Hot. Really hot. I don't even care if they have sex, I seriously doubt the intensity could get any stronger. Again, :O~

Author's Response: They will have sex. After all this they will have sex even if it kills me.

Damn I would have loved to know Marie's reaction to the anatomically correct lollypop ;)