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Reviewer: flyen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2017 2:41:21 AM Title: Nothing But A Promise

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Reviewer: Jolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2017 10:11:06 PM Title: Desire

Can't wait to see how this ends. The connection between Rogue and Magneto was a cool twist!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2017 2:55:18 AM Title: Nothing But A Promise

Sad but beautiful. Really enjoyed, anxious about it being sort of a spoiler though, lol.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2017 2:47:21 AM Title: Desire

Brilliant to see a new chapter of this, glad you're unblocked! Sad to see rogue gone, I desperately want Logan to go after her, even though I know he's needed at the school. Felt bad for kitty too :( hope to see more soon!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2016 7:45:49 AM Title: Desire

Loved seeing another update so soon. Fascinating and soo creepy. Loved it! Hope more soon:)

Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2016 11:24:36 PM Title: Desire

This is so unique. I can't wait to see where it's going!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2016 2:49:44 AM Title: Desire

Creepy and dark, but so good! Damn, Logan get your ass back to the mansion! Excited for more of this!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2016 7:42:45 AM Title: Desire

Loved seeing more of this, great chapter, and fantastic twist with magneto at the end there. Hope more soon!!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2016 5:38:14 PM Title: Desire

Yay, welcome back, it's great to see a new addition to this story :) intense part, I must have more right away (or whenever you have time to write it, lol). Very excited for more!

Author's Response: Hiya, thank you! and yeah sorry for being so late on the update, Il try my best for another update this week. I definitely won't leave the story incomplete, cause i understand how frustrating that can be lol, but my updates may be a little slow. Thank you for sticking with the story! :)

Reviewer: Jolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2016 11:14:08 PM Title: Desire

Glad to finally get to read it! Such an interesting twist

Author's Response: Thank you :DrnWhat do you think is going to happen by the end? Im curious as to what you think...

Reviewer: Jolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2016 10:55:31 PM Title: Desire

Chapter should post now. Fingers crossed. Dying to read it

Author's Response: THANK YOU! hope you enjoy :)

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2016 12:25:44 AM Title: Desire

Still nothing. It's the website not you. On the off chance you have the writing anywhere else, you could post a link to it in the author notes?

Author's Response: Heya thanks, iv started slowly uploading it on fanfiction.net, recheck chap 9 link will be up. Just to warn, the chapters are behind on the other site. :)rn

Reviewer: DarkFay Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2016 12:40:26 AM Title: Desire

I don't see Chapter 9. I am really liking the story. Hope to see more!

Author's Response: Yeah sorry bout that, someone told me the website has been glitching for a while. Glad you like it! Il keep trying to update, so hopefully il get lucky lol :)

Reviewer: Jolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2016 10:32:46 PM Title: Desire

Can't see chapter. WRFA hasn't been letting authors post this month. Most are posting in AO3 and adding link to here.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2016 10:07:03 PM Title: Desire

Still glitchy, just a thought, if possible you could post an offsite link to the new chapter in the authors chapter notes. At least until this is sorted out?

Reviewer: loveliex Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2016 5:07:16 PM Title: Desire

To The review i accidently deleted! Got ur message, thank you!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2016 11:04:21 AM Title: Desire

Ooh, two awesome chapters in a quick succession, very impressed! Not so much with erik, who better change his mind Quick about that decision!!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2016 7:41:00 AM Title: Desire

A deal with the devil indeed, I have a feeling magneto will live to regret this decision! Brilliant chapter, excited for more!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2016 3:07:33 AM Title: Desire

Wow, definitely going to have to read this one over a few times and try and grasp what's going on! But oh so good, and oh so creepy! Looking forward to seeing more!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2016 4:15:15 PM Title: Desire

Aw, rogue, girl can't catch a break, I wonder what further trauma awaits, yikes!!
Sweet that kitty is so eager to help (now she just needs to ditch the boyfriend, she's way too good for him, lol)
Excited for more! I'll be thinking about this for the rest of the day!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2016 9:42:02 AM Title: Desire

Woah at that cliffhanger, very creepy, but cool! Really hope the next part isn't too far away!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2016 6:28:12 AM Title: Desire

Aww, yay - thanks so much for the great update! So good to see this again :) poor rogue, doesn't look like things are going to be any easier for her now she's awake.

On the bright side, I thought it was adorable how eager kitty was to help rogue - hopefully she won't suffer any bad consequences for that!

Looking forward to the "big" chapter - can't wait!!

Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2016 7:03:43 PM Title: Desire

This chapter is quite melancholic and sad. I feel so bad for Rogue. I liked the conversation between Kitty and the Professor; it was really touching. I wonder what the Phoenix is up to? What does she want with Marie? What will happen when Marie finally comes to?

This is a gripping story and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update soon!



Author's Response: Hello, thank you for your review. I haven't been able to update in a while, but i definitely will by the end of this week. I'm trying to develop the plot in a way that won't make it ridiculously predictable or sloppy so it's quite difficult to write since I'm very aware of my grammatical mistakes...but yeah lol thanks :)

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2016 3:49:55 PM Title: Desire

That bit at the beginning with rogue trying to help the little girl falling from the swing had me bawling. So emotional. I'm scared what else Phoenix has in store for her :(

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed that. I found that part quite...melancholy, also. And as for Phoenix...will it irritate you If I leave you guessing? lololol

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2016 8:25:50 AM Title: Desire

So damn good, the bit at the beginning - purgatory, written so well. I really liked the scene at the end with kitty and the professor too. Hope more soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I wasn't really keen on how I wrote this chapter felt like I'd jumped (if you know what I mean)

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