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Reviewer: Catchlove Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2018 8:16:24 AM Title: Bed of Roses

Loved this. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Catchlove Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2018 10:35:11 PM Title: Will You Remember?

Heartbreaking. Beautiful.

Author's Response: Thanks, you're making my day with your comments.

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Date: 05/30/2018 10:19:13 PM Title: On Concupiscence and Cookies

Awesome!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2018 6:51:04 AM Title: Bed of Roses

Hooray! Thank you for finishing this! I’m so glad Logan got his HEA after all he went through. ;) Great story. I love all of your DOPF series.

Author's Response: Heh, took me long enough to finish so thanks for sticking with me on it. :) Hopefully other stories will be up soonish.

Reviewer: iridescentzen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2018 4:55:54 PM Title: Bed of Roses

Awesome, hot end to this interesting what if story. Loved it. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2018 10:39:16 AM Title: Bed of Roses

Thank you for updating this wonderful story! This chapter was so good and the dose of Jubilee was spot on with how I imagine her being, lol. Thank you thank you thank you!

Author's Response: *blushes and scuffs toe in the dirt* Aw, thank you and you're welcome! Truly I seem incapable of writing Jubilee any other way.

Reviewer: iridescentzen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2018 9:21:05 PM Title: Bed of Roses

I may have fan-girl squee'd the moment I saw you updated this. I love it! Loved Jubes' line on the phone when Rogue called. Great imagery with the vat full of drops, too.

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks. I can't see Jubilee any other way.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2018 12:10:52 PM Title: Bed of Roses

These last two chapters have been excellent, and while I love the action (always!) I'm looking forward to Logan and rogues happy ending :)

Author's Response: Thank you and next week for happy ending. :)

Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2018 7:04:40 PM Title: Bed of Roses

Woohoo!! Keep the chapters coming!!

Author's Response: :) One more to go.

Reviewer: Harleyhoney5314 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2018 12:06:47 PM Title: Bed of Roses

This chapter gave me the same smile. LOVE.

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you enjoy the rest. :)

Reviewer: Jolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2018 10:41:32 PM Title: Bed of Roses

Ooh! So excited to see the new chapter! I love this story and hope we get to the HEA. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! The happily ever after is in two chapters, guaranteed.

Reviewer: iridescentzen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2017 9:31:25 PM Title: Bed of Roses

I need more of this; it's like crack. I just find the idea of Rogue being kind of lost along the way with the change in the time line very intriguing.

Author's Response: Thanks. More is on the way, it just needs some polish to make it shiny. I know the thought of Logan not knowing where she was is interesting to explore.

Reviewer: Grahammom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2017 2:34:59 PM Title: Bed of Roses

This is so good...

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Jolie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2017 1:04:59 PM Title: Bed of Roses

I'm loving this story. Followed it (as I do all your writings) from the beginning. I look forward to see where this is going.

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry I'm taking so long with it, I really hope to finish it eventually.

Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2017 11:19:38 AM Title: Bed of Roses

Logan is so hard on himself, even though he was being kind of an idiot. The push and pull for Logan in this chapter is wonderful. He doesn't want to trouble her but can't really keep away.

Love the the dynamic between them, it is a great sign of trust for Logan to let someone else do the decision making. Its great to see how practical Marie is about the whole situation, that she trust Logan enough to let him go do his thing.

Jubilee is awesome as always, though somehow I don't think she was his first choice, was Kitty away? Some very interesting reveals at the end there, surprise to see Logan working on a murder case, PI Logan perhaps.
Can't wait to see where the investigation will take him.

Author's Response:

Logan is being a little bit of an idiot going into everything blind, especially his relationship with Rogue. Trust has been a big part of getting to know each other here. <br> Kitty would have been the obvious choice to get the job done quickly and efficiently. But you work with who you get and Jubes can be trusted to get the job done as long as you can put up with her sense of humor.  Maybe a little PI and hopefully he'll get it solved sooner rather than later. Thanks!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2017 10:51:21 AM Title: Bed of Roses

So awesome to see this updated again, really cool part, and love the smut! Now hopefully Logan can make it back to rogue in one piece! Looking forward to seeing more!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, Logan has stirred up some trouble, but you know happy ending will be in there somewhere. :)

Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2017 11:58:34 PM Title: Bed of Roses

I love where this is going and can't wait to see what is next! Oh, and I agree... great job with the Greek mythology

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I'll get this wrapped up soon.

Reviewer: DarkFay Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2017 5:42:27 PM Title: Bed of Roses

Yeah, Dumbass is a fitting title. At least he's healing. Look forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Heh, he definitely wasn't at his best here. Thank You.

Reviewer: DarkFay Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2017 8:54:42 AM Title: Bed of Roses

She told him, "Marie". *smile*

Author's Response: <3 Couldn't go far without her telling him.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2017 12:26:14 PM Title: Bed of Roses

Just caught up, loved the fact that they're in bed together, despite it not having the best leadup (in this chapter anyway...) really can't wait to see what's next! (Hopefully something m rated!!)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm nothing if not predictable and the next chapter will be m rated, it just needs a few more tweaks before it is ready.

Reviewer: DarkFay Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2017 8:45:35 AM Title: Bed of Roses

Great not-date! The smoochie was sweet, too. *smile*

Author's Response: Thank! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: BlueFrog Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2017 10:49:15 PM Title: On Concupiscence and Cookies

Great! Simply great! Love Rogue taking advantage of the situation :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Rogue recognizes when a girl needs to press her advantage.

Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2017 6:46:01 PM Title: Bed of Roses

Wow this was an unexpected turn of events, Logan getting shot and in the back too, could it be a targeted attempt? I hope this is not a portent of things to come.

The Drops medication is interesting, I've always wonder how the cure would work when it comes to Logan and his healing.

It's awesome to see Logan acting so nonchalant despite being full of lead, even has enough energy to flirts. And Marie for being so calm and level minded, even though far enough not to get her uniform bloody, has she been in this kind of situation before?

Very intriguing chapter can't wait for more. Oh one last thing loving the Greek mythology references.

Author's Response: Logan getting himself into trouble, say it isn't so. Unfortunately the reason he was in New Jersey, that he can't remember, just caught up with him.

I'm thinking here it doesn't stop his mutation, but slows it down considerably. And I don't think Rogue has been in this situation before, but she feels that she has no choice here but to help him.

Thanks. I'm not good with Greek mythology so I hope I'm not screwing it up too bad.

Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2016 9:55:24 PM Title: Bed of Roses

This Marie is starting to remind me a little bit of her in your other story, Lay Down My Heart. She is really observant, these little detail you add into the description is great, she is quick to analyzed Logan's powers. Already figured out some of his tells.
I always thought Logan would have a good poker face. She is able to see it could also be partly due to the fact Logan might just a bit more relaxed around Marie.
The end of the chapter is great, Logan didn't even think twice before showing her how to break into a room. And of course he finally got her name again.

Been a joy to see these two interact, more please.

Author's Response: Heh, I like to think that all my Rogue's share some of the same qualities. And Logan is a puzzle she wants to figure out. Logan does have an excellent poker face, but his soft spot for Rogue sometimes gets in the way. :)

There will be more, I have a couple of chapters done for a year (unbeta'd) and will try to get them polished and up eventually. I just need a pair of blinders on so I don't run for the new shiny all the time. :) Thank You!

Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2016 3:21:30 PM Title: Bed of Roses

Character interactions are great in this chapter, and the dialogue take the cake again. The pace of the chapter is wonderful. I loved seeing the more in depth character interactions, and following along with Marie's thoughts as she tries to puzzel Logan out.

Finally wonderful to see Logan put so much effort in planning out the date. Going to the fights should be interesting, since I'm sure that was not on the itinerary.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love me some chatty characters when it flows well. :) This chapter does give Marie a lot to think over about Logan and what kind of man he is.

Logan did seem to want to impress her. The fights are a mixed bag for Logan.

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