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Date: 05/03/2010 1:57:39 AM Title: Bring Her Home
Spell check, grammar check, or get a beta - you packed a lot of punch into a tiny space, which is good. The barrage of typos, punctuation errors, etc. is incredibly distracting. You've got a good start - don't stop!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I do have to agree that alot of my early stuff is full os mistakes. I have the stories in my head but my skill in grammar is often lacking, i now have a beta and I hope these first storie do not put you off reading the new ones.
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2009 10:51:27 PM Title: A New Life
"My little girl has the tiniest feet I've ever seen They fascinate me; I could play with them forever."
oh god, that made me almost cry. i feel the same way whenever i look at my niece, who is like my daughter!
i'm sad this is the end of the series, but what a PERFECT ending.
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2009 10:49:50 PM Title: A Time To Mourn
"we are going to celebrate the freedom her mother found"
i love that *sniff*
i felt the same way after my sister passed away.
Author's Response: I think that is the highest praise anyone could have given me thank you so much it is very touching of you to say
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2009 10:48:16 PM Title: A Mothers Hope
a great memory for Marie's mom.
the mental image of Logan being nervous asking her permission to marry Marie is so sweet and almost me me giggle, but it was too sincere to allow me to laugh.
gorgeous!
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2009 10:43:20 PM Title: Broken Doll
i looooooooooooove how you are able to make such a massive impact with so few words. full of emotion and power with a few lines.
wish i knew how to edit myself for maximum impact like that but i tend to be a blabbermouth.
but i've got a new idea for a story once i finish the two i'm working on. maybe i'll adopt your shorter style, i think it'll work with what i have in mind.
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2009 10:41:42 PM Title: A Mother's Thoughts
she's a good mom...knows when to shush LOL!
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2009 10:40:54 PM Title: Revenge
hell yeh, go Logan.
and i like that he didn't even want to dirty his hands on that piece of crap!
awesome!
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2009 10:36:35 PM Title: A Father's Thoughts
just found this story after you put two new chapters up.
eeewww, gross father gross!
hope Wolverine slices and dices him later in the series!
must go to read the rest, like 9 more chappies to absorb and love!
Date: 11/05/2009 3:54:16 PM Title: A Time To Mourn
"...but I knew as soon as this charcter popped into my head it would happen"
Yeah, they getcha sometimes like that, don't they? Lovely job, and yes, it was Storm to a "T".
Date: 11/05/2009 3:52:14 PM Title: A New Life
*Squeeeeeeeee-giggle* Logan playing with baby feet! What a completely adorable mental picture!!
Date: 11/05/2009 12:43:31 PM Title: A New Life
Loved this whole arc. While each story was short they all hung together well and told a great story.
Date: 11/05/2009 11:26:47 AM Title: A New Life
Well, they found their way. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you. There had been so much angst I wanted it to have a happy ending I'm just a softie.
Date: 11/05/2009 10:00:35 AM Title: A New Life
I love the Logan has a little girl. You know she's gonna have him wrapped tight as can be around every one of her adorable little fingers--and toes! This has been a such a great experience, for you too, I think, as much as for me and your other readers. I look forward to seeing your byline in the future.
Peace,
Wendie
Author's Response: Yeah I love it. Imagine Logan with a teenage daughter. Most likely do the stupid thing my cousin did add up how much his 16 year olds make up has cost foolish foolish man
Date: 11/05/2009 9:48:28 AM Title: A Time To Mourn
This is quite touching. I like that this was from a 'third-party' POV; it helped keep it from being too weepy. And you did Storm's 'voice' proud. No worries.
--Wendie
Author's Response: I hate weepy and angst but it seems it likes me. If i could've got hold of Storm I would've stangled her by the end of it.
Date: 11/03/2009 7:52:32 AM Title: Commitment
Swoon...I hope they found a room quickly;-)
Author's Response: any room would do
Date: 11/01/2009 8:24:31 AM Title: A Mothers Hope
Truly, what every mother wants for her daughter, you captured her Mom's thoughts just right!
(and you need 2 more chapters before the 12 step kicks in, LOL)
Author's Response: Thats right two more to go already written I'll send them to the beta then get them posted but real life and work have interfeared how dare they.
Date: 11/01/2009 8:15:49 AM Title: Commitment
Lovely, just lovely!! *sniff*
Date: 11/01/2009 8:13:34 AM Title: Invisible Clock
It may not have been easy, Summer, but it came across just beautifully!!!! It read just fine.
Date: 11/01/2009 8:10:34 AM Title: A Mother's Thoughts
Copy all previous reviews.... they've already said what I would have!!
Date: 11/01/2009 8:08:12 AM Title: Revenge
Oh yeah, that works just FINE, Summer!! And the reason he gives Jubes is PERFECT Logan!
Date: 11/01/2009 8:05:05 AM Title: Rescue
A very strong, foreshadowing, chapter, Summer!!
Date: 11/01/2009 7:58:29 AM Title: A Father's Thoughts
A good, long, HOT shower, definitely. But it seems to be the way Marie's father is usually written, so it's not that huge a surprise. You've written him so perfectly evil, it'll be good to see how Logan takes care of him!!
[Report This]Date: 10/30/2009 12:27:16 PM Title: A Mothers Hope
suggestion, they have a kid,lol nothin new
Date: 10/29/2009 1:20:50 PM Title: Commitment
Thanks for sharing this one. Heck, thanks for writing it. I tweaked it some, but all the raw material was there before I ever laid a hand on it. I gotta love anything that features Logan, Marie and any kind of wedding.
Peace,
Wendie
Author's Response: Don't believe it folks it was much shorter and not as detailed. Glad you liked it
Date: 10/24/2009 3:59:43 PM Title: Invisible Clock
Not only does this not sound 'forced', it is the perfect progression in the chain of events you are detailing. And writing it from Logan's POV keeps it from being too weepy and maudlin, as it could have been if it were from Rogue's POV. Excellent work.
Peace,
Wendie
Author's Response: Glad you liked it I guess I was worried about it being to soppy plus the computer froze twice so it was close to four it the morning when finally posted