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Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2010 11:28:19 AM Title: Dreaming?

'Can she get any cuter?' Hell, no, just like this story couldn't be any better. --Wendie

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2008 4:57:56 PM Title: Not Alone

Denial is only a river in Egypt....denial is only a river in Egypt....denial is only a river in Egypt....keep telling yourself that, Marie, maybe one day you'll believe it.
Lovely.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2008 8:32:36 PM Title: Not Alone

Beautiful.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2008 3:53:35 PM Title: Not Alone

Aw! Lil' Marie still has a crush on him...And she's using her 'nightmares' as a way to get some good feelin' time? I love it. Smart girl.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2008 1:43:27 AM Title: Not Alone

oooohhhhhh marvelous, rich, emotional... love it.

Reviewer: Shuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 2:18:20 PM Title: Not Alone

This is nice, a slightly different take on the relationship. Any chance of more?

Author's Response: No chance for more. This was the last one. But thanks for the fb. Always appreciated. :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2008 6:33:11 AM Title: Intervention

pft. Not that I endorse a relationship between them in his story, because 'Dreaming?' was too sweet to ruin with sex, but he already ruined it. The hope that she'll 'grow up' and be a regular 'normal girl' is just silly. So she can be a scant trolling in bars for free drinks and child support payments? Whateva. Logan still sounds like a big, sad, little sweet heart and Jean not the least bit bitchy, which is nice. :)

Author's Response: Scant? *cringes* I was aiming for a regular girl spending a night out with her boyfriend... Eep. I guess I should have dropped off the woman on Logan's lap and make the girl look a tad bit more innocent? :) I guess this was one of those stories that a bitchy Jean would have ruined completely, and my Logie has always been perhaps little too nice for his own good.rnrn

Reviewer: crazy4israel Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 1:44:15 AM Title: Dreaming?

I love it. "Where the fuck do I put my hands?" LOL I've so been in that same situation. Where DO you put your hands when cuddling with a friend?
Great fic. Will there be more?

Author's Response: For Dreaming? No. One-shot. Any longer fic I write tends to turn smutty, and in this one there really is no room for any closer relationship between those two.

Reviewer: Valeriusjka Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 4:09:06 AM Title: Dreaming?

*pets your Logan muse*

I always enjoy reading your stories. Mostly I think it's because of your Logan muse, he's so endearing. Especially when he's talking to himself.

I can see your writinf growing cuter, the closer spring is. I just want to hug your L&M.

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 12:53:41 AM Title: Dreaming?

Oh, Logan. This was so very touching, Ara. With his preoccupation about touching her and trying to keep awake, worrying about her not coming again, and trying to figure out where to put his hands. Trying to figure out how little he can say.

It's his last question that makes me want to cry, though.

Reviewer: Geeves Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 8:24:11 PM Title: Dreaming?

awww that is so f-ing sad and beautiful. well done Aranenumenesse

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 7:34:06 PM Title: Dreaming?

I agree, great story, no need for anything just each other. Like how they betray each others vulnerability.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 5:22:22 PM Title: Dreaming?

*sniffles* So fragile and pathetic and desperate. And Marie's having a hard time too. Very beautiful little story. And to anyone who would suggest smut here they're crazy. SO much better like this.

Author's Response: Notice the category. X1. No smut in this one. Like Logie said, he couldn't molest a child. I'm glad you people agree with him. :)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 4:55:42 PM Title: Dreaming?

BEAUTIFUL!! Just beautiful!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2007 4:19:24 PM Title: Dreaming?

Soooo sad but a really beautiful story!

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