The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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I think there could be an epilogue here. :-)
Nice job!
I like this story. One little thing, however: you are continually switching between third person point of view (author/narrator's point of view) and first person point of view (Logan's point of view)... Makes it kind of hard to follow the story. Might be a good idea to be a bit more consistent and the point of view you're writing, yeah :-)
Otherwise, good job!
Somehow I knew even the Wolverine wasn't going to be able to maintain the intensity of THAT workout for very long. Not the weightlifting. The self-restraint. --Wendie.
Great beginning!! Nice set up, the anticipation is palpable. Only problem is the switch between first person and third person..a little confusing.
oh my....
(ct runs off to find hubby!)