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Still a great start, but the switching from 3rd to 1st person is a little rough to follow.
Storm is still an idiot for thinking this was the better "choice" for Marie than the Twister competition.
*blush* oops! didn't realize I'd already left a review!! Guess I really liked it, huh?
GORGEOUS!!!! Simply gorgeous!! I love it when Logan is written with such eloquence...both that he is written so eloquently by the author, and that he himself -the character - is capable of such eloquent speach, actions, everything!!!
Nice series you got going here, Kia, I really like how it's moving along. Only recommendation I would make is to get yourself a beta. You need some proof reading, some spelling corrections and you tend to switch from first person to third person narrative - it's all a bit distracting.
oooooooooooooo, nice angst!! I remember being that young, and Storm's actions would have royally pissed me off too. I don't blame you, Marie!!
WOW!!! So glad you took the high road in this one Kia. You were so right about the emotional side of their relationship vs the physical. And you nailed it! I sometimes have trouble with Logan being so 'deep' and talkative; but you wrote him so well, it all just ran together so naturally. Brava, my dear, Brava!!