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I always think of Ororo as elegant in her speech so she's allowed to wax poetic.
I could almost imagine velcro being torn apart as Marie and Logan parted. =P
Oh Marie, always trying to be so brave.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think if anyone is going to introspect about the Rogan relationship, Ororo is a good one to do it. Thanks for reviewing!
Whoa. Intense. Poor Rogue. :(
Great chapter. Little nervous about Logan going to see magneto on his own, but oh so interested in what's gonna happen next.
Author's Response: Yeah, Magneto and Wolverine never sounds like a good idea, does it? It'll take a few chapters before I get there, but hopefully it'll be worth it!
Keep in mind as I write this I am the author with a 60k word story that is just now getting my characters out of their hotel room BUT I LOVE these kinds of character bits. I think they make a story more realistic and the reader doesn’t have to wonder “what does character A think of all this”. It is also really nice to see Logan and Marie through someone else’s eyes. Your Ororo is especially insightful. I find it wonder that you have decided that although Marie can access what she knows from other personalities she pays for it each time she does it. (This has always been Rogue’s tragic flaw, what has kept her from becoming the ultimate mutant unstoppable mutant.) Having her act and react like Freddy drives that point home with clarity and force. Well done.
Keep in mind as I write this I am the author with a 60k word story that is just now getting my characters out of their hotel room BUT I LOVE these kinds of character bits. I think they make a story more realistic and the reader doesn’t have to wonder “what does character A think of all this”. It is also really nice to see Logan and Marie through someone else’s eyes. Your Ororo is especially insightful. I find it wonder that you have decided that although Marie can access what she knows from other personalities she pays for it each time she does it. (This has always been Rogue’s tragic flaw, what has kept her from becoming the ultimate mutant unstoppable mutant.) Having her act and react like Freddy drives that point home with clarity and force. Well done.
Author's Response: Ha, I don't think anyone is complaining about your characters not leaving their hotel room. ;-) I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and also the price Marie has to pay for the information she gains from absorbed personalities. Thanks so much for your review!
Great chapter! You can write 40 or even 100 chapters, if they're all like this one! I really appreciate the way you show us their budding connection through Ororo's eyes:things are much clearer from the outside, aren't they? Since I love protective Logan, I was "Awwww" reading Ororo's description of his behaviour.
The second half was harder:Rogue seems so unselfish, so generous, risking her identity, facing a such cruel task to save complete strangers.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it...I was so torn about whether it was an unnecessary diversion or if it added something useful to the story. Thanks so much for reviewing!
ohhh an update! and such a good one too! thank you! i needed this. Great update. I loved seeing Ororo's perspective. It was very enlightening! more soon please!
Author's Response: Sorry to hear you needed cheering up, but glad I could help, and very glad you liked Ororo's perspective. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Good heavens, but you are wonderful at this. 'Connection'. Too right. I absolutely LOVE that you chose Ororo to show us the connection that Logan isn't even fully aware of yet, but is glaringly obvious to anyone else who cares to look closely enough. And that nasty connection between Rogue and Freddy...comes in handy now and then, but God it's hard on new friendships, ain't it? Short, sweet and oh so revealing...another spectacular chapter. If they are all this good -- and why wouldn't they be? -- you go right ahead and write 40 chapters, darlin'. That'll be just fine with me. --Wendie
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad that you liked the Ororo part. I wasn't sure if the Ororo stuff actually added to the story or not. I'm so happy to have the encouragement!