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Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2011 2:44:37 PM Title: The Conversation

Oh, by all means, not Scott...Although, I kind of like him.

Author's Response: I like Scott too. :-D But when it comes to someone who would destroy Scott's bike, I can see that he's not the man for the job. He might have tried to get away with just flattening a tire or something, where as 'Ro went to *town*! :-D

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2011 8:15:15 AM Title: The Conversation

smooch you computer? erm... while you were out Hugh Jackman broke into your home and rubbed his crotch on your laptop screen. Work? xXx

Author's Response: LOL. That's quite the image. And here's the sad truth. I don't have much of a crush on Hugh Jackman, just Wolverine. ;-) Hugh Jackman in other stuff is just...meh. I don't like seeing him all suave and cheery. I like 'em growly and scowly. ;-)

Reviewer: natsuki sochi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2011 7:46:23 AM Title: The Conversation

I think that was pretty stupid for Marie to spill everything about her mutation I mean supposing Logan was an agent for the government she would have no secret weapon to defend herself coz she just finish sprouting out details of her mutation and basically how to counter it. Been should runaway have taught her taught her about ABSOLUTE CAUTION even if your gut is telling you he can be trusted, it doesnt mean it saying toss your care. Wen I read that part of the story I wanted to just slap and punch her at the same time for the lapse of judgement. Though I hope she sees Logans txt messages @ to the Professor and misinterprets it thereby cozing her to become insecure or better yet confronting Logan by touching him to confirm her knowlege of wot is been planned. Thanx Author-san

Author's Response: I do see your point. My only rationale (besides Marie just being lonely and needing someone to talk to) is that she had to tell Logan about her skin (especially because he's going to be hands-on taking the buckshot out) and he had already seen pretty much all the components of her mutation. Even if he didn't know exactly how, he saw her render someone unconscious with a touch, use their knowledge, and use another power. So she was more revealing what it was like for her to be able to do those things than the fact that she *can* do those things, y'know?

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2011 12:03:00 AM Title: The Conversation

I don't like Logan reporting to Te professor but I guess if he didn't he wouldn't have any reason to stay with Marie. lol so I can deal More soon! please!?

Author's Response: Yeah, it's kind of a bummer, isn't it? On the one hand, I feel that Logan is a professional, and would do what he needs to do. On the other hand , I feel like it's not really in his nature to be sneaky, and he's not liking the role he's been shoved into out of necessity.

Reviewer: Melancholy Rogue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2011 9:00:27 PM Title: The Conversation

See now, I was getting my swoon on until that last bit. :/ I had almost forgotten that he was there to "obtain the target" so to speak. Sigh... still it's a great read and I am excited to read more. :)

Author's Response: Aw, sorry to harsh your buzz. ;-) If it helps, I think Logan may lose sight of the "objective" from time to time too.

Reviewer: Tamana Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2011 8:48:24 PM Title: The Conversation

Hey, I'm using my phone. Before, I couldn't log on, but now I can - which is great.

So, thanks for a wonderful chapter. Everything was great about it, especially regarding our favorite girl Marie's mutation.

I'm dying to find out about Iceboy and the last part - Scott thing! And I hate you for making me wait! Please, upload the new chapter as soon as you can.

Now, because you did an excellent job on this chapter, I'm gonna wish you a sweet dream (cause its night in here) involving a certain hairy feral mutant :D enjoy!

Love,
Tamana

Author's Response: Interesting! I wonder if they changed the site's mobile access up in a way that fixed your phone access and torpedoed mine. :-P I'm so glad you liked the chapter. I'll do my best to be quick with the updates! Thanks for the dream wishes, and right back atcha. ;-)

Reviewer: baybelletrist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2011 8:11:14 PM Title: The Conversation

I like what you've done with the place. ;)

Seriously, you did a fine job of letting Marie explain her mutation without a case of the blah, blah, blahs. You really got into their heads and let the reader see what was happening there, but without resorting to telling us "Logan was sad" or "Marie was happy." I like the breadcrumbs, too.

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought the explanation went okay. And that you are liking the breadcrumbs. I finally sat down and outlined the story, so I think I actually have a master plan now!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2011 7:50:27 PM Title: The Conversation

I thought you did a great job of explaining Maire's mutation without it sounding repetitive. I really like their interaction and you can really feel Rogue's loneliness in this. I'm interested to find out what Logan asked for that excluded Scott's involvement. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad it went okay. This Marie seems a little more neurotic than some of my others, so I'm trying to reign her in a little. And you'll probably find out pretty early next chapter what Logan asked for, if you put the clues together. ;-)

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2011 7:28:26 PM Title: The Conversation

oh oh I wonder if the ice came from a now dead Bobby who ran into Rogue before and that is why Logan doesn't want Scott to know????? Hummm. Love it.

Author's Response: Hmmm...some of that is right. But I won't tell you which part. :-D

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